# A poem: I bare witness

**URL:** <https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/t/a-poem-i-bare-witness/3694>\
**Category:** Creativity\
**Created:** [March 14, 2026, 9:02pm UTC](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/t/a-poem-i-bare-witness/3694 "2026-03-14T21:02:12Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 7\
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**Author:** ![DarkStar](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex012/user_avatar/schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/darkstar/32/17376_2.png) [@DarkStar](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/u/DarkStar)\
**Post date:** [March 14, 2026, 9:02pm UTC](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/t/a-poem-i-bare-witness/3694/1 "2026-03-14T21:02:12Z")

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Was feeling kinda down so i wrote this its not one of my good ones but figured I would share it anyways.

So im here again…

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On this golden frozen day

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Body full pain…surrounded by hate

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But through this vow… hear me bare witness

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As a bare witness…at lest in my mind

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The miser insane ..the dealer revered

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The poet malign …ever line a lie

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Deeper than the… volition within him

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The currents that spin him …around… time and time

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Again I vow ..to bare witness

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As a bare witness…at least in my mind

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With nothing to say …I see truth come in focus

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The cold granit plate …once again … no Hocus pocus

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Its a sin that I wrote this … even worse you stole it…

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Just to see me whence again …in pain and hopeless

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My brother … the rodent feels my pain with his back broken

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That wouldn’t make sense to the humans who broke it

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A good man …to humans …but not to brother rodent

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I dont have anything else to say ..but have a good day… be kind d if you can …hate is destructive…decay of fear at the root most of the time

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Again I bare witness….as a bare witness…at least in my mind

I bare witness to my own suffering

@FreeLunch

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**Author:** ![FreeLunch](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex012/user_avatar/schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/freelunch/32/1001_2.png) [@FreeLunch](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/u/FreeLunch)\
**Post date:** [March 14, 2026, 9:11pm UTC](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/t/a-poem-i-bare-witness/3694/2 "2026-03-14T21:11:52Z")

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Lots of interesting imagery

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**Author:** ![FreeLunch](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex012/user_avatar/schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/freelunch/32/1001_2.png) [@FreeLunch](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/u/FreeLunch)\
**Post date:** [March 14, 2026, 9:12pm UTC](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/t/a-poem-i-bare-witness/3694/3 "2026-03-14T21:12:32Z")

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I’m sorry you sound like you’re going through it right now

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**Author:** ![DarkStar](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex012/user_avatar/schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/darkstar/32/17376_2.png) [@DarkStar](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/u/DarkStar)\
**Post date:** [March 14, 2026, 9:30pm UTC](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/t/a-poem-i-bare-witness/3694/4 "2026-03-14T21:30:10Z")

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Yea ..it kinda sucked….. I was just going throug some dumb sh it and wrote it to vent. Probably wouldn’t even postit but I figured it might be entertaining or someone might like it lol

Im goodnow bro.just feeling dysfunctional and disliked. Its transient

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**Author:** ![FreeLunch](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex012/user_avatar/schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/freelunch/32/1001_2.png) [@FreeLunch](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/u/FreeLunch)\
**Post date:** [March 14, 2026, 9:30pm UTC](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/t/a-poem-i-bare-witness/3694/5 "2026-03-14T21:30:51Z")

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Well you got a good response on the forum. We all like you. You’re a personable dude.

It’s just in your head. All the hate

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**Author:** ![DarkStar](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex012/user_avatar/schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/darkstar/32/17376_2.png) [@DarkStar](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/u/DarkStar)\
**Post date:** [March 14, 2026, 9:32pm UTC](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/t/a-poem-i-bare-witness/3694/6 "2026-03-14T21:32:56Z")

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Yup..I dont know how to get it out but it will get better. I was seriously glad to see people didn’t hate me. Ive been kinda selfish lately and maybe a little annoying lol

Glad im apart of the forum …

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**Author:** ![SzSupportAdmin](https://yyz2.discourse-cdn.com/flex012/user_avatar/schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/szsupportadmin/32/334_2.png) [@SzSupportAdmin](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/u/SzSupportAdmin)\
**Post date:** [April 26, 2026, 6:06pm UTC](https://schizophreniasupport.discourse.group/t/a-poem-i-bare-witness/3694/7 "2026-04-26T18:06:42Z")

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Closed on April 26, 2026, 6:06pm UTC


