Poem : how else can i be

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Im alone on the hill …that I died on

Fragile deeds… done in vain

As the world looks on

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In a song …sung in pain…that i lied on

Never knew…how it felt

To be this far gone …

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Sometimes I feel strong …

Stolen hope …in the dark

I must hold my own

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I Suffered.. all alone …

Every step …every breath

I guess we all earned

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Stop and think ..

What really matters . In life

Shattered dreams

in the night

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Can you see

Too many lifetimes gone by

Spent in misery …and why

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Are we just animals

Clever beings built to be

Just machines that bread and eat

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It’s understandable…

The grand scheme a tragedy

How else can we be

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In truth …

Love is soo strong

But I feel soo damn wrong

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This path that im on…

Unprepared for the shock

Oblivion…

Poem i wrote just messing around lol i like it tho

@everhopeful @Schizbro

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It’s great :+1: , it’s a proper poem !

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Thanks bro… I like doing poems sometimes

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Did you ever think of putting them into your music? Either with your own voice or a computer synthesized voice?

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I like this a lot. Great poem @Signless

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Yea…I use to write songs but I stopped a while ago. I just write them to vent emotions now. When im feeling too much ….

I will post a song I sung tomorrow. Its the only one I ever recorded my voice.!!

And honestly man…the poems you come up with are really good. Every day you find something meaningful perspective on life and put it in a poem thats clever lol pretty awesome man!!!

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Thanks very much @Signless . That was a very nice thing to say.

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