A poem: I bare witness

Was feeling kinda down so i wrote this its not one of my good ones but figured I would share it anyways.

So im here again…

On this golden frozen day

Body full pain…surrounded by hate

But through this vow… hear me bare witness

As a bare witness…at lest in my mind

The miser insane ..the dealer revered

The poet malign …ever line a lie

Deeper than the… volition within him

The currents that spin him …around… time and time

Again I vow ..to bare witness

As a bare witness…at least in my mind

With nothing to say …I see truth come in focus

The cold granit plate …once again … no Hocus pocus

Its a sin that I wrote this … even worse you stole it…

Just to see me whence again …in pain and hopeless

My brother … the rodent feels my pain with his back broken

That wouldn’t make sense to the humans who broke it

A good man …to humans …but not to brother rodent

I dont have anything else to say ..but have a good day… be kind d if you can …hate is destructive…decay of fear at the root most of the time

Again I bare witness….as a bare witness…at least in my mind

I bare witness to my own suffering

@FreeLunch

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Lots of interesting imagery

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I’m sorry you sound like you’re going through it right now

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Yea ..it kinda sucked….. I was just going throug some dumb sh it and wrote it to vent. Probably wouldn’t even postit but I figured it might be entertaining or someone might like it lol

Im goodnow bro.just feeling dysfunctional and disliked. Its transient

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Well you got a good response on the forum. We all like you. You’re a personable dude.

It’s just in your head. All the hate

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Yup..I dont know how to get it out but it will get better. I was seriously glad to see people didn’t hate me. Ive been kinda selfish lately and maybe a little annoying lol

Glad im apart of the forum …

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