Poem: above the clouds (positive)

Shrouded in ashen grey rain ..a world without saturation

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The people go here and there chasing whatever joy they can find

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Thunder claps in praise…in praise of what?

The sunshine …

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Clouded the maze ..dazed and refracted through the prism of human volition

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A child cries searching for its mother’s safe embrace

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In Direction of what? … the sunshine

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Flowers and towers climb .. higher and higher

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Searching..thirsty… seemingly towards different things… but in truth …

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knowledge is light and light is power.. still… the sunshine

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In those moments ..when the grey clouds of life seem to take up all the space in your mind…

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to take all the light from your eyes…remeber the sunshine

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When the darkness within..steals the very breath from your lips … and the seat of action falters…remeber the sunshine

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Because above the grey ashen clouds every time …even if you cant see. ..is the sunshine shining for you…

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The words of a wise man I try to follow .

@Schizbro @FreeLunch @everhopeful @POET @labratmat @anon27913786 @anon27913786 @TheCanuk

Not the best but this is a positive poem instead of the negatives ones lol

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Today is my birthday by the way lol 38

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I loved your poem!

Happy Birthday @DarkStar :birthday_cake:

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Thank you :blush: @Vinegar

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May the sunshine inside light your way on this birthday @DarkStar

Happy Birthday!

:sun:

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Happy birthday

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Thank you bro :folded_hands:t5: good to see you man !!!

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Dope poem. I really like it. Well thought out. Nice structure. Great imagery. Cool refrain.

Happy birthday man! Much love

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Happy Birthday @DarkStar !!! I love your poem

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just saw this now… pretty deep stuff

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I think it’s really good man! happy birthday day too

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Happy birthday good things

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