Jazz Song: hot 🔥 or not?

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Yea man…I’m gonna redo the side guitar on the hook and take the intro out or make it more interesting :thinking:

It could use another person’s style.. I wish @POET still played guitar :guitar:

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Thanks man, maybe one day lol i dont really have the space to practise here but id like to

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Oh ok ok. Well if u do start playing we should . I had an inspection of my studio apartment today and the guy asked me to play the sax lol

Was like I can play a few notes

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Way way clearer

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Way way way better!!! Almost done 2 verses with improvements on v1 @2Waynez @labratmat

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Sounds like a famous producer made it

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Hahaha …that’s a really nice thing to say :grin:

Thanks bro. How you actually liked it lol

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I thought it was engaging and easy to listen to. It took me places in my mind. The track was a ride. Sounded pro all day. Thanks for sharing

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Glad you liked it brotha … I was kinda thinking this would be one of the better ones. Thank you for checkin the song out man !!!

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@labratmat @Rainstorm @Schizbro @Fisherman1992

Another guitar session… are these sounding good or?

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I like the rhythm guitar layering and the lead is great too!

You should get a looper and then practice live by playing the rhythm and then the lead and really test yourself.

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Good mixing of the guitar in this one

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I might actually do that bro. I want to improve my speed !!!

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Thanks man… I felt like it sounded really chill compared to most of my other songs. I’m not sure if I will develop it RN or do another but I definitely dig the vibe

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Matt I went back and listened and the harmony and drums I like but the guitar playing is pure :poop: :poop: :poop: :poop: :poop: :poop: :poop: :poop: :poop:

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Well you seem to want to put yourself down.

You are not a professional (yet).

It sounds fine.

Why not just play along with actual jazz music you like for awhile?

I am doing that with my electric for the last few days with zimbabwe old school classics. It is teaching me how to use a plectrum properly and i surprised myself with how good it sounds.

You cant just make music. You need to put in the hours, my friend to be an artist! @tarnishedLotus

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Thanks for that Matt lol. I legit hope to be a pro one day but I’m afraid I might be too late with AI and everything.

And yea bro …only way to get better is putting in the work. To be fair my last like 7 songs have been decent and this one was just a session that I might develop.

Also..I hate that I put my self down but it’s hard not to. Feel like I’m being fake or something when I don’t..I know it’s absurd but yea…

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Legitimately good, man. Failed Dorian sounds like a tune from The Internet

Good vibes

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Thanks bro and yea I thought the same thing about it sounding familiar. I think like every 10-20 songs I do something derivative :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes::sloth:

Anyways I’m glad you liked it man …I think I can do a much better job with that guitar tho

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Keep practicing man! You have skill!

Blue Skies is chill also :fire: