Lazy poem about suffering

I heard what you said and it cut me deep

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Right down to the bone you’ve wounded me

To

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Torn off my mask so the world could see

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Everything a sane man hides for his sanity

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Vanity pride lust and gluttony , hate and the lies that protected me

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Clear in your eyes that you despise my soul

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Not a part but The whole of who you think I am

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It took me a while but now I know

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I’m more than the story you repeatedly told

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Your Opinions just so …opinion

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The reality is you have little dominion

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Cruelty and violence mascaraed as justice

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But trust this …I will break free from your hold

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Though the struggles I’ve learned the products of hate

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In a way it burned a way through to wisdom

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In time I will learn to see all with eyes of love

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The solution to polution the ivery gate

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To take my self to seriously is to add to the weight you place on me …from now on I will try to live loosely . Life is too short for all this ■■■■…

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Let’s just get along

Se

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Nice poem a lot of powerful phrases

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Thanks man… I should have taken more time but I just wanted to get some stuff off of my chest…

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This is a great poem. Life is too short to worry about what others think. I try to tell myself that but with the voices berating me all the time it’s hard to hold on to it

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