Feel soo dysfunctional

Thanks bro!!! Trying to get on your level lol :smiling_face_with_sunglasses:

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Is that you singing

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Nah..ai lol

This is me tho im ghetto :rofl:

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Wow its not bad

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Yeah you shouldn’t say it’s super horrible. It’s not. It’s really good

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I listened to it on gummies last night and it tripped me out

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:rofl: I miss gummies lol

Let them close this topic…I wish I could do gummies but its pretty bad for me now .. :unamused_face:

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Im gonna try to do it better !!

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Yeah I don’t recommend it. I had an okay time but it kind of rattled me and made me symptomatic. I do not recommend it

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Yea..I did them all day long last year… wasn’t healthy.. For me at least. Im glad you like the song and I think I will finish it!!! I thought people might think it was horrible to I put “super horrible” lol

I have a second verse and a second half(instrumental) to the hook. Gonna do my best on singing but I really need a real singing voice…. U know ?

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Thank you zoe! I will tag u when I finish it. I wish I knew someone who could sing tho … also..hope youre good :+1:

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Singing is really difficult. Some people are just blessed

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Yup !!

Enough words

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Im trying to be good :innocent:

I might literally be the deranged spawn of Satan lol :neutral_face:

Second draft. The last bit is pretty bad but it gives you the idea of the bridge. The hook is pretty ok but all of it is done poorly. Keep in mind its a draft…

after the owwws on the hook keep listening its a second part..anyways this is a ego hit lol ..my best attempt and not good

I cant sing also ….

@everhopeful @FreeLunch @2Waynez @labratmat @Zoe @Mars @POET

Sounds bad on phone but better on headphones

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Is that your voice? Really good song. I can imagine myself sitting on a balcony on a sunny day sipping a lemonade listening to that!

But like I always say to @labratmat , and maybe it’s just my taste, but I always think you should have something “new” in the 2nd half of a song if it’s over 3 minutes. It could be my poor attention span saying that though !

Good work!

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Thanks bro !!! Its still a draft but I did put some effort in lol :laughing: I think im gonna right a second verse and then put that bridge at the end. I think im gonna have to use ai for yhe backing vocals tho!!..

Anyways..im glad you liked it man. Will tag u when I finish it. Also I started playing yhe real sax yesterday!!! So some more new music coming soon !!!

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Thats seriously good man. Well done. Your voice is nice.

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Thanks man…. Appreciate that. Also glade you liked it man..I put in a little work but its gonna take alot more to get it to the quality of my other music !!!

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I’ll listen to it as soon as I can. With my mom right now

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