I just got what you were saying man.. did you get to the bridge at the end? The song cuts off a few times.
If youre talking about the hook..dude that is a wonderful idea 
im gonna add some variation to the second and last chorus. The song had 4 parts tho
Yes, I listened to the whole thing.
Cool cool 
Its very good that made me cry
Im sorry zoe.. its a sad one. Im gonna do mostly happy stuff tho. Actually im gonna make yhe second verse more hopeful and maybe change it up a little. Dark stuff helps you vent emotions but it needs some light 
Thanks for listening to it. Im glad u liked it . 
Very heartfelt. Touching song. I enjoyed it but I couldn’t appreciate it until I put headphones on and really got the lyrics. Good things.
Thanks bro!!! I am gonna do some mixing !!!
Seriously glad you liked it man… hope your good 
Yes. It was very beautiful.
Weird, I used to go by TonyK online back in high school, even thought it’s not my name
Im gonna find a girl and write a song about her lol maybe she will give me a shot 
Looool that sounds so cool 
You deserve a beautiful girl.
I wish lol
If i get better im gonna actually try tho I cant actually be in a relationship atm. I guess if it never happens I would still have other things !
That is weird man… why did you go by that name lol?
Lol I can’t remember
Well thats my name lol
Hope u liked the song !!
I was thinking last night and this morning and im thinking the best thing is love and wellbeing… if we wont ever know everything or be all powerful as species..maybe goodness to others and love are the best and most meaningful things in life?
I might put thst in the last verse .. @Ducky
Thats beautiful @tarnishedLotus your feeling creative then, thats good!!!
Im feeling a wider perspective. I woke up light headed and my vision was blurred a little. Thought I might die and it hit me how senseless hate and violence are. And when I was feeling afraid I might actually loose consciousness and die….I didn’t feel and anger or hate..even for the people who I think treat me bad. I only wanted them to be happy without the pain of hate and malice…
I think at the end of the day because of what we are and what the universe is..love ..kindness..understanding..stuff like thst are the point . Hope ur good again today 
Yeah love and wellbeing and kindness are underrated
Yes im feeling okay ive had a shower and hubby is cooking dinner, im feeling more positive. Just gotta take the rough days too cos you know it keeps going round in circles ( up, down ) lol. Take care @tarnishedLotus