Bro that build up was nice 
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Just listened to it. Working class rip. I actually used to listen to music in that genre back when I had subscription to New Internationalist and was generally more political. Your vocals are a little too airy so I have to strain to get the message. Agree with the overall message but it could use a little more conventional musical practices like ryhming and a less complex rhythm behind the vocals.
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@labratmat @POET @tarnishedLotus @Rainstorm
drop practice for the album after the one i’m completing currently! uploading late at night cause wow i am quite up. started out sounding really industrial and gritty sounding but once i even so much as thought of putting Chroma in i knew it was gonna go way colorful and stuff. sheesh.
hope you enjoy lol
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@zytroxide yo whatsup! You sound great as allways tbh the little drumfills before the section changes (I heard 2 of them) don’t convince me a lot because the general idea and sound is amazing
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Your songs are very good @labratmat ,I like it…
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Guitar is awesome 
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sounds really cool dude! 46346
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@zytroxide TRACK i started last night
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This one is nice man… I wish I could get my mixing on point like that. You an poet have clean energetic mix!! Anyways ..it sounds great bro…the music 
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Such a beautiful pad sound
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wait so do you or don’t you like the drum fills?
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Finished song I think. I changed the guitar @Dreamer54
If you guys want to hear the final version check it out but there are only minor changes and I finished the bridge 
. Anyways I think this is a decent one 
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Don’t get me wrong, I love the track. But I think the drum fills can be more exciting… especially if you’re trying to practice them
Just trying to be honest for if helps…
Maybe volume automation, sound selection or a slightly more unexpected pattern may give it a slight push.
And ofc, everything imo and trying to give constructive stuff as a listener…
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Sounds good maybe less reverb/delay on the guitar I would prefer but besides that I think it’s great
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i could afford to do a lil more with em so the feedback’s appreciated if anything. just need to brainstorm and like look stuff up
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Lmk when u cook something!
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This is the start of sassy Sasquatch 
lol
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Oooh I love it the keyboards give it a mystifying sound
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I liked this one, well made and liking it as it’s not too “happy” but still epic. @tarnishedLotus
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Crap guys I went the other way lol would it sound more mysterious ?
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